Suicide, Her Only Hope


Sitting on the cold bench,

she was traumatized;

Her hair looked wrenched,

as her thoughts dramatized.


The emotional torture and rape,

and many heinous misdeeds;

Inner turmoil, darkness and rage,

her daily companion indeed.


The doors of her world were closed.

To whom will she tell?

That her persecutions were an overdose,

and she was living in hell.


Her relationship a living nightmare.

The hate in his eyes, knew no disguise;

For a touch of warmth, she wouldn’t dare,

and with a heart so broken, how could she rise?


With the tears from her eyes like a flood,

she laid on the floor, with a slit to the wrist;

Her only warmth was her pool of blood,

as she faded, into the valley of the beast.


Being in a bad relationship is one of the worst things that can ever happen to anyone. You don’t want to go down that road, trust me. Neither should you mock people who are in that situation. So many have lost everything because of this terrible mistake. A few live to tell the story.

My advice: If it is showing signs of eventually becoming a life threatening situation, if your partner can’t listen to reason, if you are more or less in a constant state of emotional, mental, spiritual and psychological drain, then you really do need to have a reality check, and make up your mind to CHECK OUT.

If you are in a similar situation or know someone who is, I will advise you check out more relationship tips on  for greater insights.

Be Safe!!

Ndifreke Efiok Akpan

Creative Writer.

8 Replies to “Suicide, Her Only Hope”

  1. Very profound piece. I lift up a prayer right now for all who is consumed by the spirit of suicide, I break it off your heart, mind and soul in Jesus mighty name! You shall live and not die! You shall live to declare the works of the Lord! In Jesus name! Lord comfort and console your sons and daughters around the world. We bind that spirit of frustration and ever lie of the wicked one in Jesus name. Thank you Lord for leading them into the right arms of those that will encourage them be it over a phone, meeting or in their community in Jesus name. Amen. Stay blessed!

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    1. Amen to that deep prayer, Tammy. This is a real life issue eating up various souls. We pray for the grace and strength to carry on against all odds. Thanks a lot for your prayers and kind thoughts towards the afflicted. Remain blessed.

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